युँतो हर शाम उम्मिँदोमे गुजर जाति थि
आज कुछ बात है जो शाम पे रोना आया ॥..

Beautiful lyrics.

kabhee khud pe, kabhee haalaat pe ronaa aayaa

baat nikalee to, har yek baat pe ronaa aayaa



hum to samaze the ke hum bhool gaye hain unako

kyaa huaa aaj ye kis baat pe ronaa aayaa



kis liye jite hain hum kis ke liye jite hain

baarahaa ayaise sawalaat pe ronaa aayaa



kaun rotaa hain kisee aaur kee khaatir aye dost

sab ko apane hee kisee baat pe ronaa aayaa


I dont know who copied whom but a similar lyrics was from

Movie :Hum Dono - 1961

गीतकार :साहिर लुधियानवी

korean_Soju
   नमस्ते ।
Movie :Hum Dono - 1961 गीतकार : साहिर लुधियानवी ।
Thanks for the info.

Issue let there be not who copied who. It is Ghazal and only Ghazal itself should be the issue.

"Happy Birthday To You" has been written, rewritten, ?Copied many several times. Nobody cares. CopyRight act has very clear instructions on "how to".

I searched, googled साहिर लुधियानवी
http://www.hindilyrix.com/lyricists/lyricist-sahir-ludhianvi.html

and your provided lines.

Beautiful they are.

If both Ghazals are from same writers, which differ in artistic styles; I suppose they are from various period of writer's time.

Nice to meet one more Dard-e-Ghazal.


आशिकि मेरि आशिकोमे बदनाम हो गयि
दिल अपनि दिवानगिसे बदनाम हो गयि ॥

हालत खुदकि जिँदगिपे गरिबि बन गयि
करिबि भि नजदिक आनेसे बदनाम हो गयि ॥

शेभ नहिकि कुछ महिनोसे बीन लादेन बन गयि
चेहरा खुदका शिसेमे आज बदनाम हो गयि ॥

अपने-आपको खुदने-खुदको एक धोका दे दिया
"सिम्पल_लडका" बिना दिल जिकर आज बदनाम हो गया ॥

Someone, please correct grammars.
Thanks.